Extrinsically eye-catching -portrait commission-

This picture looks amazing~ （　ﾟ Дﾟ）It's looks like a real picture with a colour pencil filter.

I love the fabrics in this- it looks really transparent and has life practically entwined within it's cloth. However... the beads that are hanging on the edge of the material looks really stiff. As well as the beads themselves look a little unrealistic unfortunately. I suggest a little more distortion within the beads and transparency?

The eyelashes also look a little fake, in comparison to the rest of the artwork. The eyelash looks a little misshapen as well. Perhaps that may be just me?

Since this is a reference of another person's picture, I can't exactly give you a big score on originality. The technique is well done You used a lot of shape, value, colour and forms. The lines with different thick-ness looks awesome~ Gives the photo more to look at.

Overall, this picture is great. There were only small details that I saw. Nothing to be totally worried about. Just need to remember it next time you do it~!